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Well written with good characters and good plot development within the two distinct plot lines. How and where the two plot lines could possibly merge certainly seems to be a literary challenge of the first order. I am sure this is primarily a teaser to encourage the reader to purchase the sequel.

Overall an enjoyable read.

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Outridder, Amazon.com

Many thanks for the comments. At the moment the two plot lines merge in my head, although all the clues are there … but being fair you’d have to understand what goes on in my head to unravel them, which is probably a big ask.

The book wasn’t really published as a teaser, although I can understand why it may seem that way. I just happened to reach a break point where the two threads accidentally reached the same place at the same time … the departure of a ship. I could have carried on but it seemed like a natural point to stop and test the water.

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