A highly descriptive novel that intrigued me from the beginning. I am very interested to see how these two seemingly independent stories merge into one. This book also introduced to me some words I didn’t even know existed in the human language, though they are […]
Book Two: Technology
The follow-on is underway and I’m hoping this one will take less time than the first. The working title is “Whim: Technology”, but this may change as the words spill out onto the page. However, the general theme won’t … there is a plan. If […]
Interesting but Puzzling
Well written with good characters and good plot development within the two distinct plot lines. How and where the two plot lines could possibly merge certainly seems to be a literary challenge of the first order. I am sure this is primarily a teaser to […]
New Revision
Many thanks to everyone who has taken the time to review the book, it’s very much appreciated. As a result of your feedback I’ve issued a new revision which will hopefully address some of the things raised: Formatting: When I first published it I was […]
Good Holiday Read
Just finished Whim, In the Beginning. Really enjoyed it . Hope it was only the beginning, on edge of seat for next instalment. Hint of Terry Pratchett, a whiff of Douglas Adams and a pinch of Philip Pullman. Really hit the spot. Can’t wait for […]
Only The Beginning
Loved the book, but how come Barry seems like such a muppet and then against all the odds ends up with mega entrepreneurial skills? Isn’t Bruno supposed to be the trading genius? ***** Emma, London, UK
Great Read
Ok. At first I thought I wasn’t going to like it, but by the end of the second chapter I was hooked! You have brilliant character names I love them! But I have a couple of questions: Where is Bruno’s world. Is it before The […]